When
the days were dark and tane was looking over his people with sadness
because are being mean. So tane said “i will get the three kete” so tane
went to his people just walking around and got ready to go up on the
wind to the overworld but just as tane was about to leave his brother
whiro came in and said “I WANT TO GO” but
tane said no i am going and that is that. So after that tane called for
wind so he could go up to the overworld but tanes brother whiro came
with him but tane did not want whiro to come with him so the 2 gods had a
big showdown. But then whiro sended bats,owls,sand flies, so tane was
like help help wind so the wind blew all the insects all away so then
tane could get whiro to the ground and he did. So after that tane ripet
the 3 kete out and went back home when he got back he ran to the other
side of the village to give the king of the village to him. So when tane
did that all the people could sing build homes and fish and all that.


Well done Regan, you have retold this legend well. I like how you used words like showdown to add to your writing.
ReplyDeleteNext time, you need to display more control over using capital letters and full stops. Also, you need to organise your writing into paragraphs.
Nic