Scary Writing

My Writing

I think you will like it.

My Dad

“Characters”

Purpose: To tell about an interesting family member!

WALT: Entertain (character description)

Task:

Think of a character you could write about. Think of all the character traits they have, what makes them special. Zoom in to the most interesting/engaging/exciting/challenging part of that character.

• Focus on showing the reader what your character is like by what they say or do.
• What descriptive words can you use to communicate this with your audience? e.g grimy, angelic, grotesque.

Criteria: I canSelf Assessment	Peer Comment Thomas
Descriptive vocabulary (words that help to SHOW the reader) use a range of verbs use a variety of adverbs Language features (phrases that help paint a picture) select one or two similes select one or two metaphors or personification use onomatopoeia to show sounds select words that start with the same sound (alliteration) My writing is 2-3 paragraphs (100 - 200 words)	Name:Regan Overall, how well do you think your learning partner has done? Comment:you did good because i like the that you did it about your dad.

My Dad

My Dad loves motorbikes because he fix them then he sells them.  When he plays games with me like rugby, soccer and cricket he aways wins. He owns two birds one cat.  He has one brother.He was going to be in a band if he did he would be the guitar.  He loves spas,motorbikes,animals and sports my dad is funny as a clown.  My dad with his friends they worked together and made a motorbike and they put it in a race.  He likes to watch night rider,top-gear,two and a half men every night he plays with the dog after tea he finds the cats and loves them in the mornings he feeds the birds,cats,dog,fish sometimes.  He sometimes walks the dog and he takes me and my sister to school if the weather is bad if the weather is bad after he picks me up. And that is why he is awesome.

Regan`s kotahitanga

We are learning about Kotahitanga

“Unity, Oneness, Harmony”

Kotahitanga is helping someone up

If kotahitanga means unity, oneness and harmony, explain why your image shows kotahitanga

• they are doing it together and the same moves.

What are the benefits of having a classroom where we show kotahitanga?

• helping together and getting work finished faster.

How does it make you feel to show kotahitanga?

• happy and safe so people would not bully you.

List some reasons why it is hard to show kotahitanga.

• people could not like you and they do not want to have help.

What are some things you need to be aware of to show kotahitanga?

• not going like get up be nice to them because they could he really hurt.

How else could we show kotahitanga?

• be really nice so they could like you.

How are you going at consistently showing kotahitanga?   

Regan`s showme

The Amazing Thing

the mystery island 2

So I was trapped on a island with a bad cut on my leg I could not move i ask my monkey to get a bandage the monkey said “oouuu” is yes. So my monkey went off to look for a bandage i came along to a windmill i did not go in because it looked bad and risky. Then i could see a long road going down so i went down it. I was sleepy i just got there it was 2 hours i had a sleep for 4 hours i woke up but just then i could see some thing moving i went up to and it was just a monkey like me. I ask the monkey if he had a life for a bandage he said yes i do i toke it of the monkey run back to my friend i put the bandage/life on the cut leg. We had to go to sleep 12 hours later we woke up we could swim so we swam away from that island